Futhermore,our earth destroyed because illegal logging.The illegal logging can cause the deforestation.Deforestation disrupts normal weather patterns,creating hotter and drier weather and causing climatic changes globally.The illegal logging also can cause the landslide.It cause from rains heavily such as the landslide happen at Cameron Highland.The phenomenon also has big risk for death.It also can make the temperature of earth become increase and hot.
Lastly,industrial waste include heavy metal such as lead,mercury and radioactive waste which find the way into river or lake.It make the water pollute and dirty.The industrial waste also cause the death of animals,plants ang algea in the water.We can lose our food source from sea .If we eat food or drink from that water,we can get a diseases.So,we as the user and the resident on the earth we must kept the earth in clean.So we can get a clean air for respiration and a clean of water to use .
SAVING OUR EARTH
BY:NOR SHAZIERA.

your essay is nice but stiil has mistakes.i believe your can do the best from this.chaiyok...becareful with the grammar and capital letter.
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